opie301 wrote:Lovely artwork Trevor. I think all the zombie death scenes look spectacular.
As far as the jokes, I think that the 'too much TV' might have been your strongest punchline, so it maybe should have been your last panel. But a worthy effort. I enjoyed the heck out of it.
To Jon, could you help me out? What was going on with Dwayne in that last strip you did? It was just a little unclear what was going on.
To all... am I too far off topic?
Good to know. I wanted the joke to relate to the smell of zombies, which is something I don't think many people think about when they're watching zombie movies. Dead flesh STINKS. So making it smell like BBQ made me chuckle inside, so I tried to make that my punchline.
Hopefully the one Jon posts on Saturday will be funnier, which I came up with second but worked on first. I think it's got a better punchline, but you guys let me know what you think.
Feedback is always appreciated.