It feels like stills from a movie, or some very detailed story boards. I'm curious to know where you're going with this.
I like your style of art, and your attention to detail - especially in the background. I have no patience to draw backgrounds, and I think my art suffers for it. Your style, however, completely engrosses the reader in another world - the world your pencil has created.
Keep posting more, when you get more done.