When last we saw Detective Eric Matthews (Donnie Wahlberg) he was chained in the basement with a corpse and a sawed off foot. Want to know how he got out? I didn’t think I did either, but be ready to get the full story in an opening scene that will make you squirm, gasp, and say, “Wow, that guy in the first movie was a real dumbass.”
afr0puff wrote:Irv's penis is now famous. They ran your review also...
bad opening line IMO. For some reason it played out ok on the site, but when I saw it in a newspaper, it didn't work.
Don't get me wrong, yes, they technically are open for debate, but they shouldn't be written that way. They need to come across as instilling confidence in the reader by presenting a cocksure POV. It's one thing if joe is just writing his reviews for the web and the "blog" type of casual browsers... but now that it's being printed in a Newspaper with the material of other journalists, it might be time to step it up.opie301 wrote:Anyway, Afro, I disagree with you almost entirely, and vehemently disagree with the point that all movie reviews "should" always be the same thing. Movie reviews are opinions that are open for debate. If more movie reviewers recognized that, then maybe we'd have fewer jerkoffs reviewing movies.
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