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joerules
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| Well i assume there will be some sort of recap because it's SMG's sister coming to house and they'll have to at least explain why she's dead. It's sad but all my current knowledge of the movie comes from the spoof of it in Scary movie 4. |
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joerules
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| Posted: Wed Sep 13, 2006 1:04 pm Post subject: |
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Ok, here's what I've got:
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<b>Joe Dunn</b>, cofounder of <b>Digital Pimp</b>, was raised on the mean streets of Collingswood New Jersey, where the constant jokes about "what exit he was from" toughened him up into the hard nosed comic creator he is today. Joe moved up to New York City and graduated from <b>Parsons School of Design at the New School</b>. Digtal Pimp was soon formed, and from the early dreams of super hero self publication was born a food critic, a group of college friends, and a movie freak.
Joe's work at Digital Pimp includes writing and drawing <b><a href=http://www.digitalpimponline.com/strips.php?title=movie>Joe Loves Crappy Movies</a></b> as well as <b><a href=http://www.digitalpimponline.com/strips.php?title=fl>Free Lunch</a></b>. Joe also draws <b><a href=http://www.digitalpimponline.com/strips.php?title=mat>Matriculated</a></b> which is written by Digital Pimp cofounder Phil Chan.
Joe also provided the art for <b><a href=http://www.coffeeachievers.net/>The Coffee Achievers</a></b>, a black and white adventure about friends, magic and coffee that was scripted by <b><a href=http://mitchclem.com/>Mitch Clem</a>.
Joe currently lives in Astoria Queens with his wife and two fat cats. It gets a little hot in the summers but the apartment is a good size and is SO close to Manhattan.
Joe is always interested in hearing from the readers. So if you would like to get in touch with him for any questions, comments, or freelance work, head on over to the <a href=http://www.digitalpimponline.com/contact.shtml>contact page</a>.
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Pogues
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| Posted: Wed Sep 13, 2006 2:40 pm Post subject: |
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| joerules wrote: |
<b>Joe Dunn</b>, cofounder of <b>Digital Pimp</b>, was raised on the mean streets of Collingswood New Jersey, where the constant jokes about "what exit he was from" toughened him up into the hard nosed comic creator he is today. Joe moved up to New York City and graduated from <b>Parsons School of Design at the New School</b>. Digtal Pimp was soon formed, and from the early dreams of super hero self publication was born a food critic, a group of college friends, and a movie freak.
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you spelled of as os in the first paragraph (the above bolded word). other than that it is pretty damn good. you have quite the list of achievements.
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joerules
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| Posted: Wed Sep 13, 2006 2:55 pm Post subject: |
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| Corrected. Thanks, amn. |
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Pogues
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| Posted: Thu Sep 14, 2006 12:02 pm Post subject: |
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i would have someone else read it, my grammar is probably worse than yours. i'm sure you have noticed from my many many poorly written post.
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trevor
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| Posted: Thu Sep 14, 2006 12:24 pm Post subject: |
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The few things I found (mostly comma errors):
"co-founder"
"Collingswood, New Jersey"
"Astoria, Queens"
"It gets a little hot in the summers, but the apartment is a good size and is SO close to Manhattan."
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Pogues
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where is willeth when we need him? seriously, you can never trust the english (just kidding. please don't hurt me Jon).
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LincM
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| joerules wrote: | Ok, here's what I've got:
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<b>Joe Dunn</b>, co-founder of <b>Digital Pimp</b>, was raised on the mean streets of Collingswood, New Jersey, where the constant jokes about "what exit he was from" toughened him up into the hard-nosed comic creator he is today. Joe moved up to New York City and graduated from <b>Parsons School of Design at the New School</b>. Digtal Pimp was soon formed and from the early dreams of superhero self publication was born a food critic, a group of college friends, and a movie freak.
Joe's work at Digital Pimp includes writing and drawing <b><a href=http://www.digitalpimponline.com/strips.php?title=movie>Joe Loves Crappy Movies</a></b> as well as <b><a href=http://www.digitalpimponline.com/strips.php?title=fl>Free Lunch</a></b>. Joe also draws <b><a href=http://www.digitalpimponline.com/strips.php?title=mat>Matriculated</a></b> which is written by Digital Pimp co-founder Phil Chan.
Joe also provided the art for <b><a href=http://www.coffeeachievers.net/>The Coffee Achievers</a></b>, a black and white adventure about friends, magic and coffee that was scripted by <b><a href=http://mitchclem.com/>Mitch Clem</a> of "Nothing Nice To Say" fame.
Joe currently lives in Astoria, Queens with his wife and two fat cats. It gets a little hot in the summers but the apartment is a good size and is SO close to Manhattan.
Joe is always interested in hearing from the readers and aspiring artists. So if you would like to get in touch with him for any questions, comments, or freelance work, head on over to the <a href=http://www.digitalpimponline.com/contact.shtml>contact page</a>.
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I've just thrown in a couple of extra lines and boldened anything I've changed. I think it's obvious what I've change about each of the bits.
I can't help but think that there's something about it that should be elaborated upon (like, only by one paragraph) but I can't quite put my finger on it. |
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